INT.DAY.Jogging circuit
Forward shot Lcp jogging.
Shot from behind Lcp jogging. Hero passes him from behind.
Hero
Hey Vinod..eppadi irukeenga?
Lcp turns for a moment but continues to jog without any response.
Hero
Enna Vinod, enna mood sari illaya?
Lcp
Aamam
Hero
Is there something i can do to help?
Lcp
Ithu varaikkum enkitta 3000 Rs vaangi irukeenga. Eppo thirumbi tharartha plan?
Hero
Thriumbiralam...tharathu thaan konjam prachana. Innaikku konjam panam patrakurai.
Lcp
Last weekum kaetaen. Innaikku tharartha sonna. Ippo ennana illannu solra..Manushanukku Vaaku thaan mukkiyam.
Shot from forward.
Hero stops running while Lcp continues to jog.
Side shot
Hero then starts walking
Hero
Appo walking polam
Closeup from behind Lcp (frame covers from Head till shoulders)
Lcp's voice over
Antha nerathula avan panam kudukathathu kooda kovam varala. Antha situationlayum oru mokka kekuthu avanukku..athu thaan enakku kovam vanthuchu.
His stoops down (head goes down out of frame).
New frame on a thin pipe lying on the ground. Lcp's hand picks it up.
Shot from behind Hero while Lcp faces him with the pipe in hand and yelling
Lcp
Innaikku nee setha da
Close up on Hero's face while his smile fades to a fearful look. Turns back and runs as the camera zooms out slowly and Lcp enters the frame with pipe in his hand and chasing the hero.
Sunday, March 14, 2010
scene 3
INT.DAY.Browsing center
Lcp checking his gmail (zoom on Buzz)
Lcp's voice over
Yaara thrirumba paaka koodathunnu nenacheno, avana thirumba paaka vendiyathagiduchu.
Hero
Hello Vinod, eppadi irukeenga?
shot from behind Lcp. Lcp looks at his right shoulder where Hero has placed his arm. Then looks up.
Lcp
Nalla thaan irukaen.
Hero
Naan eppadi irukaennu keka maateengala?
Lcp
Neengale solluveengannu theriyum.
Hero
That's right. Naanum nalla irukaen. Enna mail check pannitu irukeengala?
Lcp
Google la, Buzznu oru option pottu irukkan.
CUT to computer screen focussing on the word BUZZ.
Lcp
As of now, enna pannendu peru 'BUZZ' la follow panraanga.
Hero
Appo mode of transporta maatha vendiyathu thaana.
Lcp
Arambichutiya.
Hero
Vinod, if you don't mind, oru 50 Rs kedaikuma. innaikkum purse eduthutu varala. Annaiku saapta dinner amountoda sethu settle panidaraen.
Shot showing Lcp's pocket. He takes out a 50 Rupees from his pocket and hands it over to him.
Heroes hand grabs the note. Shot freezed focusing on the money with hands on both the ends.
Lcp's voice over
Ithu naan avanukku kudutha pala ambathu rooba notela onnu.
Lcp checking his gmail (zoom on Buzz)
Lcp's voice over
Yaara thrirumba paaka koodathunnu nenacheno, avana thirumba paaka vendiyathagiduchu.
Hero
Hello Vinod, eppadi irukeenga?
shot from behind Lcp. Lcp looks at his right shoulder where Hero has placed his arm. Then looks up.
Lcp
Nalla thaan irukaen.
Hero
Naan eppadi irukaennu keka maateengala?
Lcp
Neengale solluveengannu theriyum.
Hero
That's right. Naanum nalla irukaen. Enna mail check pannitu irukeengala?
Lcp
Google la, Buzznu oru option pottu irukkan.
CUT to computer screen focussing on the word BUZZ.
Lcp
As of now, enna pannendu peru 'BUZZ' la follow panraanga.
Hero
Appo mode of transporta maatha vendiyathu thaana.
Lcp
Arambichutiya.
Hero
Vinod, if you don't mind, oru 50 Rs kedaikuma. innaikkum purse eduthutu varala. Annaiku saapta dinner amountoda sethu settle panidaraen.
Shot showing Lcp's pocket. He takes out a 50 Rupees from his pocket and hands it over to him.
Heroes hand grabs the note. Shot freezed focusing on the money with hands on both the ends.
Lcp's voice over
Ithu naan avanukku kudutha pala ambathu rooba notela onnu.
scene 2
INT.DAY.RESTAURANT
Lcp is eating his food with a fork(remember as he needs to shake hands later), (shot from front)(frame from head till chest covering table and plates). LCP's phone lies on the table.
Someone places his arms on his right shoulder. Lcp turns right and looks up.
Hero stands by his side (camera from Lcp's point of view covering from head till table)
Cut to frame from head till chest as he speaks
Hero
Eppadi Sir irukeenga?
Lcp
Hello I'm fine.
Hero
Naama annaikku propera introduce kooda aagala. I am Raghu.
Hero offers his hands. Lcp places his fork in his table, wipes his hand with a napkin and shakes his hand.
Lcp
I'm Vinod.
Hero
Sir, if you don't mind, naan avasarathula purse eduthutu varala. Enakku food sponsor panna mudiyuma. Naan appurama pay pannidaraen.
Lcp
Sure, ukkarunga.
As the hero sits.
Lcp
Enna saapadreenga?
Hero
1 chicken briyani. 1 fish fry
Lcp
Server vararthukku konjam time aagum. In the mean time, ungala pathi..
(forward shot) Hero leans forward, extends his hand to Lcp's plate
Hero
In the mean time, naan unga meen a saaptukaraenae.
Hero shows the fish fry in the frame that he lifted and eats is.
(frame - show Lcp giving a deep sigh)
Ambience sound subsideds and voice over is heard as the frame continues to show LCP and hero enjoying the fish fry.
LCP's voice over
Server vara iruntha antha 5 nimishathula oru 100 mokka adichu irupaan. En vazhkaila maraka mudiyatha antha 5 nimisham. (Last statement stressed with hatred).
Lcp's phone rings. LCP stands up and picks up his phone
LCP
Just a second. Naan call eduthutu varaen.
Hero
Thirumba nadanthu varuveengala.
LCP
Aamam, yen?
Hero
Kaala eduthuta eppadi nadanthu varuveengannu yosichaen.
Lcp murmurs
Lcp
kadavulae
Lcp moves out of frame.
Ambience sound subsides..
side view of hero as Lcp sits opposite to him. Frame continues to show server placing his food (many times).
Finally the server places the Bill.
LCP looks at the Bill and places his card.
lcp
Bill Neriya vanthu irukku
Hero
Illayae onnu thaana vanthu irukku
Lcp
Mudiyala.
Lcp is eating his food with a fork(remember as he needs to shake hands later), (shot from front)(frame from head till chest covering table and plates). LCP's phone lies on the table.
Someone places his arms on his right shoulder. Lcp turns right and looks up.
Hero stands by his side (camera from Lcp's point of view covering from head till table)
Cut to frame from head till chest as he speaks
Hero
Eppadi Sir irukeenga?
Lcp
Hello I'm fine.
Hero
Naama annaikku propera introduce kooda aagala. I am Raghu.
Hero offers his hands. Lcp places his fork in his table, wipes his hand with a napkin and shakes his hand.
Lcp
I'm Vinod.
Hero
Sir, if you don't mind, naan avasarathula purse eduthutu varala. Enakku food sponsor panna mudiyuma. Naan appurama pay pannidaraen.
Lcp
Sure, ukkarunga.
As the hero sits.
Lcp
Enna saapadreenga?
Hero
1 chicken briyani. 1 fish fry
Lcp
Server vararthukku konjam time aagum. In the mean time, ungala pathi..
(forward shot) Hero leans forward, extends his hand to Lcp's plate
Hero
In the mean time, naan unga meen a saaptukaraenae.
Hero shows the fish fry in the frame that he lifted and eats is.
(frame - show Lcp giving a deep sigh)
Ambience sound subsideds and voice over is heard as the frame continues to show LCP and hero enjoying the fish fry.
LCP's voice over
Server vara iruntha antha 5 nimishathula oru 100 mokka adichu irupaan. En vazhkaila maraka mudiyatha antha 5 nimisham. (Last statement stressed with hatred).
Lcp's phone rings. LCP stands up and picks up his phone
LCP
Just a second. Naan call eduthutu varaen.
Hero
Thirumba nadanthu varuveengala.
LCP
Aamam, yen?
Hero
Kaala eduthuta eppadi nadanthu varuveengannu yosichaen.
Lcp murmurs
Lcp
kadavulae
Lcp moves out of frame.
Ambience sound subsides..
side view of hero as Lcp sits opposite to him. Frame continues to show server placing his food (many times).
Finally the server places the Bill.
LCP looks at the Bill and places his card.
lcp
Bill Neriya vanthu irukku
Hero
Illayae onnu thaana vanthu irukku
Lcp
Mudiyala.
scene 1
LCP jogging on a sidewalk (with watch on his left hand)
LCP'S voice over
Enakku avan arimugamanathu ippadi thaan
The hero(without watch) passes by him. Turns back and asks
Hero
Sir, time Enna
Lcp looks at his wrist watch
LCP
Ezhu Napathu aachu sir.
Hero smiles and says
Hero
Ezhu eppadi sir Napathu aagum.
He continues to run forward, while Lcp just stands there puts his arms on his hips and just stares at him.
(prefer shot from behind during the conversation)
LCP'S voice over
Enakku avan arimugamanathu ippadi thaan
The hero(without watch) passes by him. Turns back and asks
Hero
Sir, time Enna
Lcp looks at his wrist watch
LCP
Ezhu Napathu aachu sir.
Hero smiles and says
Hero
Ezhu eppadi sir Napathu aagum.
He continues to run forward, while Lcp just stands there puts his arms on his hips and just stares at him.
(prefer shot from behind during the conversation)
Saturday, March 13, 2010
Overview
INT. DAY. Moderator's house
Moderator enjoys his morning coffee, sitting at a breakfast table in his apartment. Sits by the side of his window overlooking a small street.
Casually looks through his window, suddenly his eyebrows lift, puts his cup on the table, stands up goes near the window and presses his face against the window.
OUT.DAY. Street.
Group of people (6 or 7) chase a person (hero). No one's face is visible at this point. This is the view supposed to be from the window. Just one person(hero) running in the front. Give sufficient gap and then the group of people.
INT.DAY.Moderator's house
Turns back from his window jumps over his chair. CUT TO. hand scrambling a shelf with moderator's voice over 'Innaikku paathu thuppakiya enga vechaennu theriyaliyae. It's ok'
CUT TO.
OUT.DAY.Street adjacent to Moderator's house.
Moderator sitting on the compound wall with his legs over the street facing side. Sits with his sunglasses on.
INT.DAY.STREET
CLOSE UP on the legs chasing. CUT to top view as the hero turns the corner.
CUT TO front view as the hero turns the corner - only legs on frame initially and camera frame up to show hero's face. Face and head full of sweat. Hero turns back for a moment to check how far are people behind. As he turns his head droplets of sweat splash on the frame.
Moderator gets ready to jump infront of the hero. But manages to jump only by the side of the last chasing person (Lcp) and holds him.
Last chasing person (lcp ) stops and looks surprised.
LCP
Enna enda pudikara. Frontla odaravana pudika vendiyathu thaana.
Moderator
Athukku thaan try panninaen, seviru konjam uyarama irunthathala konjam delay aagiduchu.
LCP
Methuva kuthichutu kathayaa solra..
Moderator
Atha vidu..enna matteru..Yen ithana peru oruthana thorathareenga
LCP tries to run again as he speaks
LCP
Athu oru periya katha pa.
But Moderator hold him again and asks
Moderator
Parava illa sollu kepom.
LCP
Avana pudikanum da. Late aaguthu vidu
Moderator
Eppadi irunthaalum nee lasta thaan odara. Mathavanga pudipanga.
LCP
Yen aasa theera avana naanum adikanum da.
Moderator
Avlo thaana. Ennoda carla va. Pudichuralam.
OUT.DAY.CAR
A car comes out from the house to the street and stops.
Car's interior.
LCP
Enna pa aachu
As the moderator tries to start the car
Moderator
Start aaga maatenguthu...
(engine fails)
LCP
Olunga odiyachum irupaen.
Moderator
Ithana peru oruthana pottu thorathareengalae..avanoda friends naalaikku ungala chumma viduvaangala?
LCP
Thorathara 6 perula 5 peru avanoda friends including me...oru ponnu avanoda ex-girlfriend.
Moderator
Interesting...Appadi enna thaan yaan pannan avan..
Lcp leans back on his seat and looks up
LCP
Mokka sir Mokka..avlovum mokka..oru manushan evlo thaan atha tolerate pannuvaan.
------------runs the flashback---
Scene 1
Voice over
Avan adicha pala mokkaila onnu rendu mattum solraen
Scene 2
Scene 3
Scene 4
Scene 5
Scene 6
Scene 7 (ex girl friend)
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Moderator enjoys his morning coffee, sitting at a breakfast table in his apartment. Sits by the side of his window overlooking a small street.
Casually looks through his window, suddenly his eyebrows lift, puts his cup on the table, stands up goes near the window and presses his face against the window.
OUT.DAY. Street.
Group of people (6 or 7) chase a person (hero). No one's face is visible at this point. This is the view supposed to be from the window. Just one person(hero) running in the front. Give sufficient gap and then the group of people.
INT.DAY.Moderator's house
Turns back from his window jumps over his chair. CUT TO. hand scrambling a shelf with moderator's voice over 'Innaikku paathu thuppakiya enga vechaennu theriyaliyae. It's ok'
CUT TO.
OUT.DAY.Street adjacent to Moderator's house.
Moderator sitting on the compound wall with his legs over the street facing side. Sits with his sunglasses on.
INT.DAY.STREET
CLOSE UP on the legs chasing. CUT to top view as the hero turns the corner.
CUT TO front view as the hero turns the corner - only legs on frame initially and camera frame up to show hero's face. Face and head full of sweat. Hero turns back for a moment to check how far are people behind. As he turns his head droplets of sweat splash on the frame.
Moderator gets ready to jump infront of the hero. But manages to jump only by the side of the last chasing person (Lcp) and holds him.
Last chasing person (lcp ) stops and looks surprised.
LCP
Enna enda pudikara. Frontla odaravana pudika vendiyathu thaana.
Moderator
Athukku thaan try panninaen, seviru konjam uyarama irunthathala konjam delay aagiduchu.
LCP
Methuva kuthichutu kathayaa solra..
Moderator
Atha vidu..enna matteru..Yen ithana peru oruthana thorathareenga
LCP tries to run again as he speaks
LCP
Athu oru periya katha pa.
But Moderator hold him again and asks
Moderator
Parava illa sollu kepom.
LCP
Avana pudikanum da. Late aaguthu vidu
Moderator
Eppadi irunthaalum nee lasta thaan odara. Mathavanga pudipanga.
LCP
Yen aasa theera avana naanum adikanum da.
Moderator
Avlo thaana. Ennoda carla va. Pudichuralam.
OUT.DAY.CAR
A car comes out from the house to the street and stops.
Car's interior.
LCP
Enna pa aachu
As the moderator tries to start the car
Moderator
Start aaga maatenguthu...
(engine fails)
LCP
Olunga odiyachum irupaen.
Moderator
Ithana peru oruthana pottu thorathareengalae..avanoda friends naalaikku ungala chumma viduvaangala?
LCP
Thorathara 6 perula 5 peru avanoda friends including me...oru ponnu avanoda ex-girlfriend.
Moderator
Interesting...Appadi enna thaan yaan pannan avan..
Lcp leans back on his seat and looks up
LCP
Mokka sir Mokka..avlovum mokka..oru manushan evlo thaan atha tolerate pannuvaan.
------------runs the flashback---
Scene 1
Voice over
Avan adicha pala mokkaila onnu rendu mattum solraen
Scene 2
Scene 3
Scene 4
Scene 5
Scene 6
Scene 7 (ex girl friend)
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